Long ago before our ancestors walked the earth there happened to be a baby pukeko. One day the baby pukeko was playing around in the forest then he got hungry. He heard his favourite food mosquito so he ran after it.
All of a sudden he had a problem. He got stuck in quick sand and called for help. The baby pukeko closed his eyes and called out to Tane Mahuta to help him get out. Tane mahuta grew the baby pukeko's feet and the baby pukeko got out of the quick sand and said happily "I'm free!" He ran after the mosquito and caught the mosquito just in time to eat it.
Pukeko lived happily ever after and never got stuck in quicksand ever again!
...And thats how the baby pukeko got big feet...they are from Tane Mahuta.
The end
10 comments:
I love pukeko, they are my favourite birds - I think it is because they do look a bit goofy with their big feet and now I know why they have them!
I like the way you said "The pukeko closed its eyes and called to Tane..."
Hi its me Chasity Im just posting you a comment to say what a wonderful story you wrote!
Hi April,
cool story,I love the way you put big powerful words in your writing
Hi April i really love your story,it is a !GREAT! story. :D
pretty interesting story well
done april!!!!!
Excellent story April. I really enjoyed the story
hi april your story is amazing because you put a picture in my mine youve got a great amagination keep up the good work.
Hey April Loved it when you said the pukeko closed his eyes and called out to tane and you put it in my big mine.You put an efffort in to your story big powerful words your great at doing stories maybe one day your will be a story writer and a book store keeper
hey April that was a great story you did the baby pukeko.My favorite part was when you wrote the baby pukeko closed his eyes and called out to tane mauhta please get me out of this mud and you put a good effort in to your pukeko story you put great powerful words in your story thats my favorite story you keep that up cause one day you will get your own book store and you can be a story writer make sure you get great ideas and put into your books but make sure that you don't make mistakes and you will be a better writer ever you will be like a professonal writer
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