I smelt smoke and saw the fire coming from the bushes. I was running away as big flames were burning houses behind me. It looked like a huge monster coming towards me. The fear was rushing through my veins.
I started to sweat as the temperature from the heat of the fire began to rise. The firestorm looked like a huge wave splashing on land. People were not breathing properly, they were suffocating from the thick, black smoke! Families looked around in utter dismay at the total devastation.
As the smoke faded away, everyone felt depressed.
By Khylie
1 comments:
Hello Khylie from Manchester, England. I have really enjoyed reading your "BUSHFIRE" piece of writing. I especially liked the ending - 'Families looked around in utter dismay at the total devastation."
You have used some powerful language - Congratulations from Ms Hansell (Principal)
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