Friday, July 1, 2011

!Bush Fire!


The small spark escaped from the B.B.Q and landed on a dry tree. It began to form into an enormous fire. The wind forced it to skip from tree to tree. It stole all the oxygen around it. People were screaming for help. I ran as fast as I could, people behind me were already on fire. I dodged the trees and ran to a clearing.
My heart was pounding as a blue helicopter poured a humongous bucket of water on the fire.Suddenly the fire vanished but there was still pockets of fire left.It was very quiet.Hell was on earth.It was like a landscape of burned trees.
The sky turned light blue,the sun tried to break through the smoke. The view was a sea of blackness. I was miserable.

1 comments:

Ms Hansell said...

Hello Lydia from Manchester, England. I am really enjoying reading your writing about the Fire. Your descriptive language paints a great picture in the reader's mind - wonderful!!! From Ms Hansell(Principal)