Wednesday, July 13, 2011

Bushfire


As I woke up I felt really hot but when I looked outside I saw a horrifying sight. Extreme orange flames turning everything into ash. I heard the fire it sounded like roaring jet planes.

People tried to get away in their cars but the wind pushed the flames to the roads and blew them up. It was dreadful. A lot of people were exhausted from running.

The smoke blocked the traffic and a lot of cars were crashing. The flames took up all the oxygen so people couldn't breath properly. Babies were screaming for their mums as they were in their houses in their beds. The houses got burnt down and the flames got bigger and bigger.

As I looked around everything was black and there was a lot of ash. Pets were looking for their owners as the fire trucks put out the last fires. It was awful
By Tim Fi

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Nice story Tim

phoenix said...

fantastic story it is realy intresting